Seems well thought out, at first glance, but you are still making quite a few assumptions. For instance, what are the criteria for rating equality? Do they include equal respect? How about equal rights under the law? Equal pay? Let’s get back to respect, is it equal in every circumstance?
Also... I’m sure that you know what precise questions you were posing, but the ones that you postulated are too vague, too general. Are you making a statement on women’s rights, feminism, transgender issues.....?
What, exactly, is your argument for, or against?
I think that you have the beginning of a very good essay, but it needs further clarification.
Thank you Thomas.🙏🌈
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